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Torment, by Lauren Kate

Torment, by Lauren Kate

Torment (Fallen Series #2)

By Lauren Kate

3.5 out of 5 on goodreads.com

Okie-dokie, if you haven’t read Fallen this is pretty much going to be a total spoiler review so just skip it for now.

So Luce (By the way, I’ve been calling her Lucy and not “loose.”  Anyway…) is now in a special school for part-angel (Nephilim) kids to keep her safe.  The one thing that really just annoyed me, and something that annoys me with a lot of fictional heroines.  THEY DON’T LISTEN.  How does, “Luce, stay here where you’re safe. People want you dead,” translate into the guy who loves you is being controlling?  Clary does this in TMI and Tris did it in Insurgent.  So. Annoying.  I get the whole woman empowerment thing, but this makes them looks just naive and stupid.

Some of the story lines like the barely touched-upon history between Shelby and Daniel, weren’t needed.  The fights between Luce and Daniel were obnoxious by the end of the book and she was coming off ridiculously bratty and whiney.  If you read back to my Insurgent review, you’ll find I hate whiney  characters.   I felt the book was whine, whine, whine, jump through a time portal, love Daniel, hate Daniel, whine, whine, whine.  At this point I really hope she does NOT end up with Daniel. I like Miles way better and if he keeps it up, he may be added onto the Fictional Boyfriends list (Jem, Four, Tucker, Finn in that order).

Props to Kate though, because I have no idea who Luce actually is as in who/what she stands for and what she and Daniel have to do with the apocalypse. If I had figured that out, I don’t think I would have kept reading the series.  There are two books left and as you can tell, I’m not as into them as I was other series, but I will get to them in due time.

July 7, 2012 0 comments Read More
Legend, by Marie Lu

Legend, by Marie Lu

If you’re going to write you need to read. It sounds obvious, but I guess it isn’t to a lot of people. My ears are always open to the next “it” book, and this time is was Legend, by Marie Lu.

Usually, when a book gets buzzed about before it’s even released it’s a no brainer.  It’s a YA book, which I love reading. I’m writing an YA book so it would be kind of weird if I didn’t.  It’s also another dystopian YA book.  Yes, though dystopians are the new Vampire, I don’t feel as though it’s overdone because they are all. so. different. And Legend did not disappoint.

The biggest different between Legend and the other dystopians I’ve read (Hunger Games, Divergent are the two I’m talking specifically about) is that it is first person POV of two characters.  There are two reasons why I love that.  First, I ALWAYS want to be in the male lead’s head. ALWAYS. ESPECIALLY in Four’s head (Read Divergent. It’s ah-maz-ing) and beyond YA dystopians, even back in Twilight I wanted to know what was going on in Edward’s head.

The other reason why I’m SO glad Ms. Lu went this direction is because she HAD TO.  This is the first story where there were two TRULY main characters  One could argue that in Cassandra Clare’s Mortal Instruments that’s the case with Jace and Clary (which is told in third person subjective multiple viewpoints) but I never feel “left out” of Jace and Clary’s head. I’m happy in their third person POV world.  There would be no story if we weren’t IN June’s head and at the same time IN Day’s head.  Much of that comes from their intelligence. Which leads into my next point:

You never read a book and think “oh the main character isn’t smart” but Ms. Lu went and told us HEY these kids are REALLY REALLY SUPER SMART! They’re smarter than you!  And the best part of that was that they still sounded like kids.  I think that is my one irk with a lot of YA fiction. They don’t sound like teenagers. (Bella’s vocabulary in the Twilight Saga,  puts my daily word usage to shame.)

I love that it wasn’t drawn out.  It takes place over a very short period of time (I think it ends up being a couple weeks at most).  She could have added more content, but she really went with the cause and effect of ONE event and made it into a full length novel. Bravo.

The cons (because there have to be some).  It got wordy at times, mainly when in June’s head.  Yes, it can be argued that it’s because she’s a super smart fifteen years old,  but if I find myself skipping over lines then the author is doing too good of a job.  Next: I haven’t yet been captured by Day and June’s relationship.  It’s not necessarily fair to call this a con though.  The Hunger Games is just on a way high pedestal to compare to other books,  and as for Divergent — well, Four is to me what Edward is to millions of Twi-hards.  I heart me some Four/Tris-ness.

Overall it was a great book.  There are some violent scenes, but none that rival the bloodbath at the cornucopia in THG, or the Dauntless training sessions. I know readers were bothered by those things in both books.  Though it has it’s moments, in general it’s not fast paced, but it’s written in such a fashion (no chapters, just the time in 24H format) that it’s always moving. I read it in three days and for me, no book should ever take me more than five.

You can read an excerpt of Legend on the series’ website here. Marie Lu has a website here and you can follow her on twitter here.

-AB
January 18, 2012 0 comments Read More